"A spasm of the lungs" p.93 this shows this is such a good use of comparison. Its cool how they used the word spasm because its gives you a definite idea about how his lungs felt inside. It makes you feel like you are in the book.
"While i feed these lubbers a yard of shit" pg.102.this also shows the language in the book. This also gives you a feel of what it sounds like to live back then. And how dirty some people were back then.
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